A Common Reason Novels Fail

By Janice Hardy

Discovering your novel doesn’t work is heartbreaking, but there are things you can do to fix it.

Story ideas are wonderful things, because they hold so much potential. Every spark of inspiration has the ability to become the next Great Novel and make a writer’s whole career. Or at least lead to a solid book readers might want to buy.

Not all ideas lead to good books, though.

Sometimes it’s the idea itself that’s the problem, but frequently, it’s the execution—but not in a “badly written” kind of way. The reason the idea (and the novel) falls flat is this:

It doesn’t tell a story, it explains a situation.

The “situation novel” isn’t about characters trying to solve problems, but scene after scene that tells readers how a situation occurs, offers a flat play-by-play of how something came to be, or even examples of why this idea is so cool.

The kicker is that the idea is often really good. The writing might even be stellar, and the plot decent, but what’s missing is the story behind it.

(Here’s more with Whose Story is It?)

If you’re struggling with a good book that’s going nowhere and you don’t know why, ask yourself the following questions:

1. How would you describe the plot?

Situation-novel descriptions typically focus on the situation, not the character with a problem. For example, you might say:

• It’s about stopping a centuries-old curse from returning to a world that banished magic years ago, and eliminated the magic users capable of dealing with it.
• It’s about how the loss of a loved one can profoundly affect the lives of those who knew the person who died.
• It’s about a bunch of people trapped in a crazy man’s house, and they have to solve a series of increasingly difficult puzzles to escape.

Any of these situations could make great books, but notice how none of them show a protagonist trying to solve a problem. 

If you can rephrase your idea to show a protagonist with a problem, then you’re probably fine. But if you can’t, there’s a good chance you have a situation novel on your hand (or a premise novel, which is very similar—a premise novel is an idea without plot, a situation novel is plot without a compelling point).

(Here’s more with Is Your Novel All Premise and No Plot?)

2. Is your protagonist trying to solve a problem?

Protagonists drive the plot, so situation novels often read like a series of connected scenes with no one in the narrative driver’s seat. There’s probably a problem in the novel, likely something major, but if you took the protagonist out, pretty much any other character could step in and not much (if anything at all) would change in the story.

In a situation novel, the novel’s problem isn’t personal to the protagonist.

It might be vaguely personal, such as “the end of the world” or “they might die” or some generic bad thing that will happen to everyone in the book, but they're not special—they just got picked to deal with this problem.

(Here’s more with Is Your Novel Exploring an Idea or Solving a Problem?)

3. Does your novel have a lot of point of view characters?

Not every multiple-point-of-view novel is a situation novel, but a lot of situation novels have multiple point of view characters, because the situation is what the author is trying to get across. That often needs scenes from a variety of characters involved in various aspects of the situation.

It’s essentially showing all the details and sides of a situation, and how it’s all unfolding, and what’s going on when, but there’s no sense of a character trying to accomplish anything on a large scale. 

The scenes might have goals, but the goals are there primarily to show the steps leading to the resolution of the situation and aren’t part of a character’s plan to deal with that situation.

Consider each point of view character and ask what would happen if you cut that character from the story. How much would change? If the only change is that you’d need someone else to show those scenes, odds are you have more situation than story in your novel.

(Here’s more with Lost in the Crowd: Working With Multiple Point of View Characters)

4. Do the characters make plot-determining decisions based on personal motivations?

Plots are created by choices, and those choices are motivated by personal reasons. Even the detective trying to solve a murder is doing it because it’s her job and she believes in what she does. But for most protagonists, what they do stems from a need to accomplish a goal that helps them get what they want in some way.

It might be something they need or want, something they have to do, something they want to avoid doing—and more. But resolving the problem and accomplishing that goal matters on a personal level and if they walk away, there are personal consequences.

(Here’s more with Decisions, Decisions: Creating Character Choices That Matter)

5. Does the ending resolve the problem introduced at the start of the story?

This one is tricky, because often the answer is “Yes.” But only at first glance. Yes, they stop the curse. Yes, they deal with their grief. Yes, they escape the puzzle room.

However, when we look closer, we realize that any character dropped into the same situation would have resolved the same problem. The people don’t matter—it’s the situation that matters. Even more, the entire book is how that situation is resolved. It’s not actually a story, but scene after scene saying:

1. This is how the curse is stopped.
2. This is how grief affects people.
3. This is how the puzzles got solved.

It can be subtle, but in a situation novel, it’s all about showing how that situation unfolds and how it works itself out, not about how the people in the story solve a problem that situation created.

(Here’s more with Does Your Novel Just…Stop? What Makes a Good Ending)

And that's really the big difference with a situation novel. 

The steps needed to resolve the situation are so cleanly and predictably laid out that there's never any doubt in readers' minds how the novel will unfold. 

• There's no sense that the characters are creating the plot from the choices they face.
• The choices are almost always one-sided and easy-to-make, so there's no tension in which way it will go. 
• The characters aren't motivated by anything other than "the plot says this happens now."
• The stakes are often super-high, but there aren't any real consequences to failure—usually because there is no failure, since the plot is predetermined. 

There are exceptions to everything, so you will find novels from time to time (such as hard science fiction) where exploring the idea is the whole point. But in these novels, the situation itself typically has many layers and the approach is about showing various aspects of that idea. It's not, "This is how X happened."

(Here's more with The Difference Between Idea, Premise, Plot, and Story)

Great novels are more than having a "cool situation." 

As my high school writing teacher used to say, stories are about interesting people solving interesting problems in interesting ways. And if those characters are just going through the motions and not affecting the situation through their choices, readers won't find any of it all that interesting.

Find the problem in your novel’s situation and give it to the right character to solve. Then you’ll have a great story to go with it.

EXERCSIE FOR YOU: Take five minutes and examine your novel's premise. Can you identify specific character-driving actions? Unique consequences for your protagonist? Does the story answer all five of the above questions in a positive way? If not, brainstorm ways on how you can turn that premise into a story.

Have you ever written a situation novel? Ever read one? 

*Originally published July 2019. Last updated February 2026.

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Janice Hardy is the award-winning author of the teen fantasy trilogy The Healing Wars, including The Shifter, Blue Fire, and Darkfall from Balzer+Bray/Harper Collins. The Shifter, was chosen for the 2014 list of "Ten Books All Young Georgians Should Read" from the Georgia Center for the Book.

She also writes the Grace Harper urban fantasy series for adults under the name, J.T. Hardy.

When she's not writing novels, she's teaching other writers how to improve their craft. She's the founder of Fiction University and has written multiple books on writing.

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