At some point during your first draft, you're bound to ask yourself if you should keep going or start editing. I've talked about this some, but that was for a specific "do I edit for X reason" type revisions, and I'm talking more general here.
Chances are this urge to edit will be prompted by reading a good article or finding some great writing advice, or even getting a super idea for the story. A light bulb might go off and you'll understand something you didn't before and want to go back and put that into practice.
But should you?
If this is your first book, you might be better off just pushing ahead and getting your first draft done. You learn a lot by completing a novel, and for many, until you actually do it, there's often that nagging doubt that you even can. Going through the process once will not only prove that you can do it, but can give you much better insights on what needs to be done overall with the story.
And, (perish the thought) if you reach the end and realize the story doesn't really work all that well, you haven't spent a lot of time revising it and can start something new that might work out better for you. This happens more than you'd think on first novels.
First drafts are usually messy, so don't stress if yours is a bit of a wreck. Sometimes we need to write a lot of bad (or so-so) to find the good stuff, while other times we know just what to say the first time out. It varies per book. If revising is going to keep you from moving forward, then maybe wait until you're done. Having five perfectly polished chapters isn't going to do you any good if you never get to chapter six. (One note here, if your goal is to perfect an opening to learn to do them well, then by all means go for it)
If you have a novel or two (or six) under your belt, or you know how you work and what will slow you down and what will save you editing time in the long run, then revising as you go can work well.
Some very common reasons to want to edit...
1. You want to cut the beginning, because you realize it actually starts on chapter two or three
Revise, Yay or Nay?: You already wrote it, so you might as well leave it and not worry about it for now. Once you're done you can go back and cut whatever doesn't need to be there without interrupting your momentum. And you'll know how it ends, so you can edit the beginning to make it resonate better.
2. The story just isn't working
Revise, Yay or Nay?: I think we've all had stories we knew deep down weren't going anywhere, but tried to rationalize why we should keep working on them. We already put so much work into it, and we feel that if we just keep tweaking we'll get it right. But if your instincts say nay and you know it's a waste of time to continue, then trust them and revise. One caveat here... If you want to revise just because you feel it "can be better," then you're probably better off pushing forward. First drafts can always be better. Heck, final drafts can even be better. That's just how writing is.
3. You realize what the real story is, and it wasn't what you started writing
Revise, Yay or Nay?: This one can go both ways. If you're still in discovery mode, then pushing ahead can help you learn more about the story and characters. (You see this a lot with premise novels, where you haven't solidified the story yet) You might need to write more to find the critical aspects of your story. But if you suddenly realize the protagonist's real motivation, or find the perfect piece of backstory that puts the entitle story in a new (and better) light, then revising can put you on the right path and save you time in the long run. It might be worth going back for that.
4. You realize you have the wrong protagonist
Revise, Yay or Nay?: You see this most often in epic tales where the core conflict isn't as personal. The wrong protagonist does kinda mean you have to start over, but at least you'll have a good sense of how things are going so the rewrite should go quickly.
5. You learned something about the writing process and want to fix the mistakes you already made
Revise, Yay or Nay?: This is probably the hardest thing to avoid doing. I can't tell you how many times I rewrote stuff to use something I'd learned. But there comes a point when you start revising just to revise, and the story isn't really improving. You're usually better off just putting the new skills into practice from that point on and revising after the draft is done. Odds are you'll learn even more before you're finished, and then you can fix everything at once.
Everyone has their own process, so you should always do what works for you. But on those days when you just aren't sure, taking a minute to objectively look at what you're doing can save you time and hassles later.
What about you? Do you push forward or do you go back?
15 comments:
Fantastic post - so very applicable to all kinds of writers.
Thanks, Janice!
On my current WIP, I kept a revision notes file, mainly for reasons that fall under your point #5. It is tempting to go through the manuscript before it is finished to use the ideas that were learned along the way, but it has proved more efficient to just make the note and push on to the end of the draft. I finished my second draft yesterday, so with great relief, I can now dive into my revision notes.
Excellent post! I am on the first draft of my first WIP and this is something I struggle with a lot. For a while I was tempted all of the time to revise, but now that I have made the decision to plow forward and just get the story down, the temptation is not as bad.
Something that I'm in the process of learning is what constitutes a "go back and fix NOW", a "go back later when you need some time to think about where to go next", and a "do NOT go back and fix until after the first draft is written!".
I'm doing it by instinct, at the moment, and it helps my process. I immediately fix anything that'll significantly change the where the story goes next (which means those last 3 chapters of the primary plot can wait before fixing because they won't influence the secondary plot I now need to write). I put notes and postpone things that, though they'll influence the story, they aren't critical. And then I don't let myself go back and touch little content edits unless I'm completely stuck elsewhere.
Sentence structure and such get adjusted as I go back and reread what I've written when I need to make sure I'm keeping the "voice" consistent.
I won't know how successful I've been with the revise-(somewhat)-as-I-go after I finish this novel draft and send it to my betas. I figure it has to be an improvement over the MANY significant revisions needed by my panster novel draft that's in its 3rd rendition and may finally be approaching publishable.
Square brackets (and some things that are unique to Scrivener) help a lot with identifying problems. If I can tell something's wrong but can't pinpoint the issue, I just put a note that indicates "[There's a problem in here somewhere!]" (Or use my "PROBLEM draft" status in Scrivener.)
I like how you take the time and effort to provide balanced posts of how situational (and idiosyncratic) writing techniques should be, rather than saying "Never/always revise as you go!" etc.
I've never understood the advice that aspiring novelists should keep writing in order to prove to themselves that they can finish a novel. I've never doubted that I could finish a novel, so this advice doesn't apply to me. Every writer is different. Sometimes I'm in the mood to write, and sometimes I'm in the mood to edit, so I do what I'm in the mood for. I find it helpful during the first draft to go back through what I've written, so I can keep track of all the plot points and emerging character traits (I'm not an outliner). I agree that you can spend a lot of time perfecting things that you'll later go on to cut. But when you're beginning your first novel, everything is practice. Nothing is wasted.
Like all advice it's really subjective. If you know you have no trouble finishing something, then the advice doesn't apply to you. My process now is different than when I started writing, or even different from a few years ago. But I've run into many an aspiring writer who gets frustrated because they get X amount of words into a book and can never get past that. They start over for various reasons, most frequently because they want to fiddle with the first half to make it perfect. If this keeps happening, sometimes it's good to just plow through and do it once.
And you're right about no writing even being wasted. It's all good practice or development.
I'm working on my very first book right now and I do go back and work on the earlier chapters quite a bit. These days, it has mostly to due with reason #5. As I learn more about plot and structure and character arcs and so on, I constantly feel the need to go back and at least partially fix up the older chapters, especially when the new concept is so firmly fixed in my mind.
Since I gain many of my insights from this blog, I guess that means YOU are partially responsible for this behavior. :)
Great advice, Janice! I think I am slowly coming to the realisation that my story just doesn't work, but I'm trying to see that as an opportunity rather than a crisis!
Working on my third novel now. I find some kinds of editing - things that change the story in some way - I must do right away. Prose polishing, descriptions, details, exposition (if needed), internal musings and such should wait for the first edit after I've finished the draft of the last chapter. Here's one bit of advice I try to remember though - write your first draft for yourself. The story is something you're imagining for your own enjoyment. When you're done, you can edit it for other readers.
I'm in the process of revising the beginning of my manuscript, but for a reason you didn't address: a ms evaluation from an agent who made extensive suggestions, most of which I can see as improving the story. And if I don't work on it NOW, I could forget what all those lovely/brutal notes scratched on my pages meant! :-)
As always, spot on and timely. *g*
I know I personally have no problem finishing rough drafts -- I'm a champ at messy, exploratory, completed drafts. But I'm still learning a lot about revising. At this point, I feel like I've got an okay balance. I'm sort of tackling it in chunks. It took ages and about seven rewrites for me to get my first act revised into something solid, since I kept having that nagging "something is wrong" feeling and it kept me from moving forward. I think I finally got all the set up I needed into place -- character motivations! Turns out I was missing those.
Anyhoo. I was planning to just go forward from there, but ran into something similar at the end of the second act (an entirely dropped plotline which, uh, completely redirects the outcome of the action...) and ended up going back through it again and again. My hope now that *that's* under control is to get to the end of this draft, revise the last act like I did for the first two, and then start looking at the thing as a whole and seeing what's left to do.
I usually push through. I'll allow myself to tweak the writing from the previous day but I use that partly to get back into the story. I'm still at that stage where I need to prove to myself I can reach the end :)
If there's something big -- a new technique I've learned, a thread that needs fixing, a change in goal and/or motivation, a way to up the tension and/or conflict -- I'll make a note using the 'track changes' comments in Word. Because the comments can be as long as I need, without affecting word count, I can be extremely detailed and that helps when I revise.
Excellent post!
Great post. Re #3, I realized 2/3 of the way through the first draft of my current WIP that it was a mess and that the story I was writing in the middle didn't jive with the opening or with the ending I was heading toward. It was so temping to stop and go back, but I pushed through and came to realize that I had two books--two heroes and two stories. I picked one and am working through the second draft that still feels very much like a first, learning things I couldn't have gotten to, I don't think, unless I'd written "The End" to that other draft.
I am so thankful that you write so many thoughtful posts. I have been hesitating to write my first novel for over a year. I have an outline that is developed enough to just get into the story, but to be honest, I'm just afraid of defeat (I know I should be writing for myself, but in the back of my mind, I know I want someone to end up reading it, and liking it), which leads me to consistently find reasons not to write my story. I'm one of those people who needs to feel the accomplishment of just getting the story down, and go back and edit later, as much as editing would be tempting. Your posts are encouraging. Thank you!
Chemist Ken, oppsy (grin). I know what you mean though, I did the same thing on my starter novel. But I did learn a lot from it.
Jen, it's totally an opportunity. And you have to give yourself kudos for seeing what doesn't work. That's a skill too.
DL: Great advice.
Cathy, oh, that's a great reason to go back and edit :)
Becky, sounds like a solid process to me.
Raelyn, I like that about track changes and word count. I just make the notes in my file, but they do add to the overall count
Becky, that's exactly why sometimes it's best to push on through. I've been there myself.
Melissa, I'm so glad I could help! You're not alone in that feeling, and lots of writers are nervous about their first novels (and showing anything to others). The only way you'll lose is if you don't try. First drafts almost always stink, and the real writing gets done in revisions :)
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