Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues. Readers are encouraged to send in work with questions, and we diagnose it on the site. It’s part critique, part example, and designed to help the submitter as well as anyone else having a similar problem.
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This week’s questions:
1. Does this scene successfully convey a playful, sexual connection without actually describing the act?
2. Does this scene show a strong bond between the couple?
3. The beach is a strong theme throughout the novel. Is it used effectively here?
4. Would you read on?
Market/Genre: Adult fiction (Please note: This snippet contains a non-graphic sex scene)
On to the diagnosis…
