Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues. Readers are encouraged to send in work with questions, and I diagnose it on the site. It’s part critique, part example, and designed to help the submitter as well as anyone else having a similar problem.
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This week’s questions:
1. Does this scene seem to work?
2. Is the POV right?
3. What about when Cole trips and bumps into the table and spills the coffee?
Market/Genre: Unspecified
On to the diagnosis…
