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Tuesday, May 30, 2023

How Point of View Can Solve Your Writing Troubles

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

Point of view is one of the strongest tools writers have for crafting stories readers just can’t put down.

Whenever I’m asked to give “one tip that will help writers succeed,” I say, “Master point of view.” I’m a firm believer that understanding point of view (POV) can help you avoid most common writing problems—especially the newbie mistakes we all stumble over at the start.

Point of view a versatile tool that does more than just help you pick which pronoun to use, or if you should write in first person or third. It allows you to put yourself in someone else’s head, empathize with them, and see the world through their eyes, even if that world is different from your own. It’s what lets you be a storyteller and not just someone who plops details on a page in a logical order.

Here are five common problems point of view can help you solve.

Friday, August 25, 2017

You Want to Write Fiction. So Where Do You Start?

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy
 
This week's Refresher Friday takes a heavily updated look at places to start when you're just starting out as a writer. Enjoy!

It's probably no surprise to anyone visiting this site that a lot of people want to write fiction. Some know exactly where to start and even have detailed story ideas in their heads, but others are a bit lost as to where to begin. With all the information about writing out there, it can be pretty overwhelming (and confusing) for someone who wants to write, but hasn't taken those first steps on their writing journey yet. If you want to write, what do you do?

That first step is easy. Just start writing.

Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Unrequited Writing Love: When You Can't Write What You Love to Read

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

I’m a fantasy writer, with a little science fiction thrown in, but all the story ideas that come to me have some kind of speculative element. As much as I love these kinds of tales (I wouldn’t write them if I didn’t), I also love contemporary novels set in the real world with real problems. Dark problems, really, tragic problems I hope no one I care about ever has to go through, but I love reading about them. I’ve tried to write contemporary stories like those, and they never work. I'm just not a "real world" kind of writer.

The adage is, “Write what you love,” but what do you do if "what you love" doesn’t love you back? Don't worry, there are ways to mix what you love to read with what you love to write.

Thursday, April 05, 2012

Is It a Genre That Starts With F? Breaking Down Genres

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

Bookstores group books according to genre for easy shelving and categorization. Agents and editors do it so they can tell writers what they like and are looking for. As helpful as this is to the business and the reader, this can seriously mess a writer up--especially if they aren't sure what genre they fall into (or if they span more than one).

I can't tell you how often I see "what genre is this?" posts on the writers' boards. I always feel for the writer, because it's frustrating to be unsure about what you're writing. But here's a tip:

Monday, February 13, 2012

Know Before You Go: Should You Know Your Genre First?

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

Maybe it's because I write genre that I find the idea not knowing what genre you're writing in a bit bewildering. But the number of "what genre is this?" questions I see on writing forums clearly show this is a not-uncommon problem for a lot of writers. And with more and more genre mash-ups and crossovers happening, it's not getting any easier. Knowing where your book fits is important, because there are elements to any genre that readers expect, and if you don't give them that, they'll be disappointed. Disappointed readers are very bad for a writer's career.

I suspect that all the focus on genre writing can leave general fiction folks a bit confused. Many writers think they must have a genre, and never consider "fiction" a legitimate category. So they look for things in their story that will place them in a traditional genre category: science fiction, fantasy, romance, mystery, western, horror. Even if they don't really belong there. (I see this most often with romance. Just because there's romance in a story doesn't make it a romance novel, for example. )

Should you know what genre you're writing before you start a novel?

Thursday, May 05, 2011

All the World's a Stage: The Stages of a Writer

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

One of the reasons I like to share my experiences in the publishing journey is because when I was starting out, I was curious about it (still am) and enjoyed hearing what others had gone through. I figured if I understood the challenges, I'd be better prepared to overcome them.

I've read a few articles recently where agents/editors have talked about the vast amount of information out on the web concerning publishing, and how easy it is for someone to write and submit. And how this ease is putting writers out there far sooner than they might have tried if all this information and technology didn't exist.

Computers alone have raised the amount of queries tenfold. Someone who would never take the time to type out 60,000 words perfectly on a typewriter, might have no problem typing out 120,000 words on a computer, where editing is simple.

Thursday, December 02, 2010

Not My Type: Formatting Your Manuscript

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

You'd be surprised how much anguish can go into what font to use when you send your manuscript out. (or maybe not if you're one of the many who worry about this)

Courier or Times Roman?

10 or 12 point?

Double or single spaced?

Many writers worry that if they don't get their manuscript formatted exactly right, their book is doomed to rejection. This is so not true. As long as your manuscript is readable and follows some very simple guides, you'll be fine. (Well, your story still has to wow them, but they won't reject you for a formatting issue)

Basic Manuscript Formatting
12 point font, Times Roman or Courier, flush left, double spaced, with one-inch margins all around, half-inch paragraph indents, no spaces between paragraphs. Chapters start halfway down the page (In Word, I use 276pt before the header, and 85pt after to center it nicely on the page without all those extra returns) with chapter header in all caps, centered. Text starts a few lines below that. Scene breaks are denoted by something graphic like *** or ## or even a blank line. One space after a period. (thanks to Shayda for reminding me abut this one)

But what if you used Palatino instead of Times? Don't worry about it. Both are still readable serif fonts. (Serif is a font with those little tails at the ends. A san serif font is one that's blocky, like Arial) The goal of any manuscript (besides being really good) is to be readable. As long as the pages are professional looking and easy to read, no one will care if they're a little different from the standard.

A .25 indent instead of a .5 isn't going to get you a rejection. However, using 5 point type will, because it's too tiny to easily read the pages. Making it 16 point type is just as bad, as this can strain the eyes too.

Starting your chapters two-thirds down -- no problem. Single spacing vs double -- problem, because it's hard to read. (See the trend? Reading ease matters)

If you have special formatting in there, like an e-mail or text message style, just choose a style that makes it clear that part is different, and be consistent. It's fine to indent if you want, or use Courier when the rest is Times. When you sell the novel, there are book designers who are going to do the final design anyway, so all that will change.As long as it's easy for those designers to tell what parts need that special look, it's good.

Italics or Underline?

Underlining is the most common, as there as tons of books, guides and sites that back this up. But this comes from the days when you couldn't click a button and change your text to italics. But today, using a serif font with a clear italic version is available to everyone. So if you want to use italics, go right ahead.

I used to use underlines because that's what the books said. I submitted my novel to agents, then later to editors, with all my italics denoted by underlines. I asked my editor which she preferred. She told me to use italics, so now I do that. But the fact that I used underlines to submit to her didn't bother her one bit. She still bought the book.

No one is going to look at your pages and shout "Eeek! They used italics (or underlines) REJECT REJECT REJECT!" They're going to read your work and judge it on how good that work is. As long as you use a readable serif font, and it's consistent and clear what your italics are, they won't care.

ETA:  In the comments, C.A. brought up a really fantastic point about this. E-readers can have trouble with italics, and underline shows up better. Since more and more agents are reading on e-readers, underlines might start to make a comeback. I'm going to see if I can get some agent thoughts on this since my agent happens to read her submissions on an e-reader. So if you happen to know the agent you're submitting to uses an e-reader, it  might be worth it to change to underlines.

What matters most is making your manuscript easy to read. Remember, if agents can't read it, they can't fall in love with it.