Showing posts with label faulty parallelism. Show all posts
Showing posts with label faulty parallelism. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 04, 2015

The Fault in Our Fiction. Avoiding Faulty Parallelism

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

Have you ever read a sentence and things just sounded…off? You’re not really sure why, but something doesn’t line up, or worse, it creates a situation that knocks you right out of the story.

One possible reason is faulty parallelism.

Faulty parallelism is when the sentence construction doesn’t align correctly, causing a weird disconnect for readers. Nouns don’t match up with nouns, verbs with verbs, clauses with clauses.