I don’t know about you, but I tend to procrastinate. My to-do list fills up, and the tasks that won’t get me into trouble if I ignore them fall lower and lower on the list until they’re forgotten. This can be problematic in life, but it’s deadly for a plot.
If the novel’s problem can be resolved “whenever” and it doesn’t matter when that happens, there’s no sense of urgency to the story. No urgency lowers tension, low tension makes it harder for readers to care, and a lack of caring means the book will probably wind up forgotten at the bottom of a to-read list.
Nobody wants that for their novel.
So give your plot a ticking clock.
A ticking clock puts time limits on when the protagonist must resolve a problem, and gives a deadline for events to happen. It creates urgency, thus raising the tension, and makes readers care more about the outcome, and the novel gets read in a breathless rush as readers are desperate to see how it all turns out.
We care about the detective trying to solve a murder because the serial killer will kill again, it’s just a question of when. And that when is spelled out in the story. He’s on a lunar cycle and the next full moon is in three days. Or a body shows up every Saturday in a very public part of town. Readers wonder—will he catch the killer before he kills again?
We care about the woman suffering with an addiction because she’s trying to sober up before her daughter’s wedding. As the day approaches and the stress grows, it gets harder and harder for her to keep her promise to her child. We can’t help but fear for her—will she make it or will she slip up and fall?
The ticking clock lights a fire under our characters and makes sure they’re not lying around and taking it easy. It’s the literary equivalent of “do it by the time I get home or else.”
Scan through your scenes in your current WIP:
- Are there deadlines for your protagonist’s goals?
- Is there an overall ticking clock for the novel?
- And just as vital—are there consequences if the tasks aren’t completed?
If not, how can you add one? Put limits and deadlines on your plot goals so your characters have to work hard to complete those all-important tasks. Even better—if they’re rushing, they’ll likely make mistakes, which allows you to craft tougher obstacles and cause them more trouble.
Do you have a ticking clock, but no real consequence for missing the deadline? Add a consequence. Raise the stakes. Put that “or else” in there so there’s a price for failing.
When your characters fear failing, so will your readers, and that will make the story all the more compelling to read.
What are some of your favorite ticking clocks? Do you have a ticking clock in your current novel?
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Janice Hardy is the founder of Fiction University, and the author of the teen fantasy trilogy The Healing Wars, where she tapped into her own dark side to create a world where healing was dangerous, and those with the best intentions often made the worst choices. Her novels include The Shifter, (Picked as one of the 10 Books All Young Georgians Should Read, 2014) Blue Fire, and Darkfall from Balzer+Bray/Harper Collins. The first book in her Foundations of Fiction series, Planning Your Novel: Ideas and Structure is out now.
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