In any story, information is going to be shared between characters, but it doesn't have to all sound the same. How a character responds can show both their voice and personality, as well help writers control how and when information is conveyed to a reader.
Everyone has their own way of answering questions, and that even changes depending on who we're talking to. How we answer someone in authority is typically different from how we answer someone we have authority over, and both of those are different from how we answer a friend or loved one.
When creating your characters, think about how they'd answer questions. This could also affect world building if there are any cultural or social issues in play.
Questions and Social Order
Society has a pecking order, and how we interact with others along that social ladder affect how we might answer their questions. Those at the bottom of the ladder might even have strict rules for answering questions from those at the top. In an epic fantasy novel this could be a major component of the plot, just as it could be vital in a contemporary middle grade novel set in the dangerous landscape of eighth grade. Try looking at the social order of your novel and ask:
- How does someone at the bottom of the social order answer those above them?
- How do those at the top answer those below them?
- How do peers answer questions of each other?
- Are there are social norms that must be followed?
- Are there any answers that just aren't given? Things not said?
How someone answers questions based on social order can tell you a lot about both their personality and attitudes, as well as the world they live in. A character who always defies authority is probably one who doesn't adhere to social norms and will answer (or not answer) according to that personality.
(Here's more on getting to know your characters)
Questions and Sharing Information
The goal of a question is usually to learn information from another person. How that character chooses to answer can show how willing they are to share information, possible trust issues, a willingness to cooperate, a desire to show off, the desire to provoke or make others uncomfortable, or even a need to feel liked and be useful. When your character is asked for information, how do they answer?
- Are they forthcoming and give full and complete answers?
- Are they evasive, either not answering at all or trying to avoid the question?
- Do they answer as little as possible, perhaps give one or two word answers?
- Do they give too much information, sharing information that wasn't requested?
- Do they answer the question with a question in an attempt to learn more themselves?
- Do they misunderstand what was being asked?
- Do they try to answer a different question?
Sometimes a reader can learn more from what a character won't answer than what they actually say. Subtext can play a wonderful role in two characters trying hard not to answer each other's questions, or trying to answer questions they think the other person is asking.
(Here's more on developing different voices for different POV characters)
Questions and Style
Since questions usually fall under dialog, they're a great opportunity to show a character's voice. Funny characters can display their comedic chops, shifty characters can obfuscate, or eager characters can read more into everything. Think about the specifics in how a question is answered--the words used, the syntax, the basis conversational style that's unique to that character.
- Do they make a joke?
- Do they answer questions with questions?
- Are they obvious or sneaky about it?
- Does it sound like an afterthought or deliberate?
- Are they hesitant or confident?
- Are they sarcastic or genuine?
- Do they respond in a way to put the other person at ease or to agitate them?
A character's personality shines through no matter what they're doing or saying, so take advantage of all the opportunities you have to show who that character is.
(Here's more on character voices in non-POV characters)
Next time your character is asked a question, think about how they answer and what that says about who they are.
How does your favorite character answer questions?
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Janice Hardy is the founder of Fiction University, and the author of the teen fantasy trilogy The Healing Wars, where she tapped into her own dark side to create a world where healing was dangerous, and those with the best intentions often made the worst choices. Her novels include The Shifter, (Picked as one of the 10 Books All Young Georgians Should Read, 2014) Blue Fire, and Darkfall from Balzer+Bray/Harper Collins. The first book in her Foundations of Fiction series, Planning Your Novel: Ideas and Structure is out now.
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