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Wednesday, August 31

Consistent or Confusing? Keeping Your Story Details Straight

By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy

Any major re-write is going to involve changing things, and when you change things, other things can get out of whack. Characters introduced on page 67 no longer reveal their names, yet everyone seems to know them anyway. Clothes change. Time of day changes. Even people change.

How do you keep track of it all?

For a lot of it, the easiest thing is to have a story bible. List every character, no matter how small, and all the stated facts about them in the novel. Hair color, eye color, age, nicknames, background facts mentioned. All the things you might need to reference later.

Do the same thing for your cities or your world, if you have details that need to be remembered. If you change the direction of a river, you don't want your protag saying something is upriver in one chapter and downriver in another. If it's a fact, write it down. Use your own judgment here of course. You know what might be relevant later. And if it turns out you didn't write it down, and need it later, make sure to list it.


For the rest of those pesky details though, it's not as easy.

That's why I like to do a read-through with consistency in mind. This is a time-consuming process, and you'll be tempted to hurry it up, but be wary of that. Spotting inconsistencies is hard enough without spreading your focus too thin. Take your time and check anything that might be off. Flip back and forth between chapters to make sure the dress your protag was wearing in chapter six is the same as the one she rips in chapter nine. (I once had Nya go from wearing pants to a skirt, though she never actually changed clothes in the story. Her hairstyle changed too.)

Character Consistency
 
When is the first time a character appears? What is known about them? What is revealed? If the narrator uses their name, was their name used before? Does the POV character know anything they shouldn't know about this character? This is especially helpful for those smaller plot-centric characters who might not appear for very long, but affect the story.

Naming Consistency

Names also often get wonky in revisions. The Find feature is your friend here. Do a quick search on every name to make sure they're all spelled correctly (if you use funky names) and you haven't accidentally added two separate spellings to the dictionary (I did this once). Check for nicknames, or alternate variations -- like if they get called by their last name versus their first depending on the situation.

Voice Consistency

While you have that Find menu up, look at your character voices. Does everyone sound consistent or do they sound like another character? We often change who said what in a scene as we revise, but we don't always change the actual dialog. Two characters might not have the same voice and speaking style. "What do you think we should do about this?" is a lot different from "So dude, what now?"

Plot Consistency

Don't forget to do a check on plot details. If something is revealed or figured out, are all the clues still there to lead up to this? Are the decisions to act that led up to this still there? Are those details even still necessary? If you cut a scene, you probably don't need the foreshadowing from three chapters back, but how often do we remember to go back and remove them? Hinting at something that no longer happens is a good way to confuse your reader.

Lastly, one of the most important things you can do when you need to check consistency is to let the book sit for two to four weeks before you do anything. (I know, it's hard to be patient, but it's worth it, trust me). You need distance from the story so all those odd things jump out at you. I've had stuff leap right out after a month away that I glazed over a dozen times while editing. We need to let the brain cache clear so we see what's actually on the page, and not what we remember.

What consistency goofs have you made and caught (or were caught) later? How do you keep your details straight?

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Janice Hardy is the award-winning author of the teen fantasy trilogy The Healing Wars, including The Shifter, Blue Fire, and Darkfall from Balzer+Bray/Harper Collins. The Shifter, was chosen for the 2014 list of "Ten Books All Young Georgians Should Read" from the Georgia Center for the Book. It was also shortlisted for the Waterstones Children's Book Prize (2011), and The Truman Award (2011). She also writes the Grace Harper urban fantasy series for adults under the name, J.T. Hardy.

She's the founder of Fiction University and has written multiple books on writing, including Understanding Show, Don't Tell (And Really Getting It), Plotting Your Novel: Ideas and Structure, and the Revising Your Novel: First Draft to Finished Draft series.
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