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Sunday, June 19

CRACK the CODE Winner!

A loud click sounds within the door. Heart drumming, you pull on the handle and the monstrous round door swings open.

Winning code: 95 - 16 - 20

Congrats goes to Jeff King who successfully CRACKED the CODE at The Bookshelf Muse, winning a first chapter critique! Please contact me as soon as possible so I can get your prize to you! Thanks everyone for playing along & helping to celebrate a great writing community. :)


  1. Way to go JEFF! Huge thanks to you Janice for offering such a great prize! Have a great Sunday, both of you!

    Angela @ The Bookshelf Muse

  2. Yes, thx so much. This prize is what I really wanted.

    You just made my day.

    I'll email you the first chapter later today. Since I just started my second draft, I want to give it a quick read to try and catch simple mistakes.

  3. Wow I am so glad I found your site… for one: your agent is my dream agent, and secondly: your site offers so much info.

    I must be a tool, because I can’t find your email address so here is mine.