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Showing posts with label RLD voice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label RLD voice. Show all posts
Saturday, September 01, 2018

Real Life Diagnostics: Is This Voice Interesting Enough?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, August 04, 2018

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This Opening (and Narrator) Work?

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Critique By Maria D'Marco Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues....
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Saturday, December 02, 2017

Real Life Diagnostics: Can You Visualize the Setting?

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Critique By Maria D'Marco Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues....
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Saturday, November 11, 2017

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This Have a Clear Middle Grade Voice?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, August 12, 2017

Real Life Diagnostics: Is This YA Fantasy Scene too Confusing?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, April 22, 2017

Real Life Diagnostics: Is This an Engaging Middle Grade Voice?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, August 06, 2016

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This Sound Like a Middle-Grade Voice?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, April 02, 2016

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This Middle Grade Science Fiction Opening Hook You?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, January 03, 2015

Real Life Diagnostics: Is This YA Urban Fantasy Opening Working?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, December 06, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This Wake Up Scene Work?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, November 08, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This YA Opening Hook You?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, October 11, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: A Look at the Opening Page of a Humorous Novel

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy  Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for speci...
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Saturday, September 13, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: Setting up A Speculative Fiction World

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Saturday, May 24, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: Does This Prologue and Narrative Style Work for You?

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Sunday, March 23, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: POV and Voice in a YA Historical Opening

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Sunday, March 16, 2014

Real Life Diagnostics: Hooking the Reader in a YA Urban Fantasy

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Due to a technical glitch, this failed to appear yesterday. Making up for that today. Real Li...
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Saturday, November 09, 2013

Real Life Diagnostics: Narrative Flow and Voice in an Action Thriller Opening

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific...
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Saturday, October 19, 2013

Real Life Diagnostics: Question it All: Things to Ask in Any Scene

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Sunday, July 14, 2013

Real Life Diagnostics: An Opening That's All in Your Head

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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Sunday, July 07, 2013

Real Life Diagnostics: Voice and Body Language in Your Opening

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Critique By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specif...
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