tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post210724617087894391..comments2024-03-27T10:02:56.747-04:00Comments on Fiction University: Real Life Diagnostics: Is This YA Fantasy Character and World Relatable? Janice Hardyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-17770129047176513092015-05-16T21:54:51.509-04:002015-05-16T21:54:51.509-04:00Ylen and Henri’s graves in another lifetime, --- t...Ylen and Henri’s graves in another lifetime, --- this felt awkward and confusing. Graves from another lifetime? They seem to be living beings so why do they have graves?<br /><br />I like what I've read but I don't feel for Ylen just yet. I agree that internal thought would bring us closer to her and to understand more about this world and the circumstances. Also I agree with what Janice Hardy said.Diana Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02165085128414693832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-23403490118583975122015-05-16T14:02:07.809-04:002015-05-16T14:02:07.809-04:00When the ghosts were mentioned I wasn't sure i...When the ghosts were mentioned I wasn't sure if the half a hundred executions Ylen saw all happened that day, or if she was seeing ghosts of past executions. I would put a comma between `uncle by marriage' and `guardian'. Does Henri see ghosts too? Or does that start to happen only after one is a certain age?<br /><br />I like what I've read of this story. It's lovely and atmospheric. The limo makes me feel like I've gone into a sideways-from-the-regular-world dream-scape.Chicoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16504144663440678542noreply@blogger.com