tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post1886143525378760534..comments2024-03-27T10:02:56.747-04:00Comments on Fiction University: Real Life Diagnostics: Weaving in World Building Details. How Much is Too Much? Janice Hardyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-19493047575417496742014-05-22T12:07:50.921-04:002014-05-22T12:07:50.921-04:00O my goodness, this is awesome! I would DEFINITELY...O my goodness, this is awesome! I would DEFINITELY read this book, it sounds amazing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15731673140971160365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-60206314967261701472014-05-19T00:51:13.477-04:002014-05-19T00:51:13.477-04:00It was interesting to see a well written piece dis...It was interesting to see a well written piece dissected, and comment made on why it worked. I'm not into sci-fi or romance but liked this piece. The voice is great and the writing has plenty of momentum which makes it easier to digest the information.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15551688387991937783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-76549388347675773432014-05-18T17:20:49.006-04:002014-05-18T17:20:49.006-04:00I went into reading this sure it was going to be i...I went into reading this sure it was going to be info dump drudgery but ended wishing I could read more. I like the voice and the way the info was woven in.Haleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15166585282012706388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-88898646410396182242014-05-18T15:19:40.767-04:002014-05-18T15:19:40.767-04:00I agree with Janice. It didn't feel infodump-y...I agree with Janice. It didn't feel infodump-y because we got a chance to read from the narrative's POV and her insertions of feeling allowed the read to flow nicely.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-63683841296993572352014-05-18T10:26:43.990-04:002014-05-18T10:26:43.990-04:00I actually really liked this, "Soul sucking g...I actually really liked this, "Soul sucking gray..." I could def relate to that feeling. Can't say I'm into romance but am always looking for one to change my mind and the sci-fi parts sound really interesting. Good Luck with it!S.E. Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01900678669541652968noreply@blogger.com