tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post1437714311256543727..comments2024-03-27T10:02:56.747-04:00Comments on Fiction University: Follow the Leader: Moving From Scene to SceneJanice Hardyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-36886325980571031912010-08-26T15:01:54.214-04:002010-08-26T15:01:54.214-04:00Thanks! That does help. :)Thanks! That does help. :)Carradeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05431561739001270522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-57911255888603066882010-08-22T08:54:02.608-04:002010-08-22T08:54:02.608-04:00I'll do the first few scenes as examples. I...I'll do the first few scenes as examples. I'm going to go ahead and edit them into the original post since others might find it interesting down the line.Janice Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02356672149097741248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-21011011266660123382010-08-20T14:07:06.706-04:002010-08-20T14:07:06.706-04:00That sounds like a good idea. I know I once notic...That sounds like a good idea. I know I once noticed that one WiP has multiple scenes that end with the narrator blacking out. I've been eyeing that to make sure they're necessary and aren't for the same reasons.<br /><br />As handy as this idea sounds, though, I'm not getting a good handle of it outside of the abstract. Do you think you could maybe do some examples from <em>The Shifter</em>, sometime?Carradeehttp://mistiwolanski.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-66742405684407181262010-08-20T11:28:04.962-04:002010-08-20T11:28:04.962-04:00Nice. I will go through my WIP with this specifica...Nice. I will go through my WIP with this specifically in mind. I have a lot of plot threads and I'm not sure if I weave them together all that efficiently some times.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12526875813399934443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-69855985881914329262010-08-20T09:36:59.976-04:002010-08-20T09:36:59.976-04:00I'm trying to keep this concept going in my cu...I'm trying to keep this concept going in my current WIP. I have two stories unfolding uniformly, one from the past and the other present. To say it's tricky to twine the two together cohesively and NOT lose the reader is making light of it. One always plays off the other. (Hugs)IndigoSage Ravenwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17143502548162174269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-5695197238245660862010-08-20T09:24:46.214-04:002010-08-20T09:24:46.214-04:00I sort of have this problem. Sometimes I have scen...I sort of have this problem. Sometimes I have scenes with problems that are subplots, but I'm not sure how they fit in. I'm just hoping that I'll manage to wrap everything up in the end. :)Brittanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08115091011126786039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-82116336249368487232010-08-20T09:22:33.589-04:002010-08-20T09:22:33.589-04:00Thanks for the tip. I'll definitely give this...Thanks for the tip. I'll definitely give this a try!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3901370917824739259.post-46163454609485973092010-08-20T09:05:53.539-04:002010-08-20T09:05:53.539-04:00The train analogy made it very clear. Nice trick a...The train analogy made it very clear. Nice trick and good metaphor >:)<br /><br /><a href="http://cold-as-heaven.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> Cold As Heaven </a>CA Heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07558100567878233142noreply@blogger.com